Death of Evil - Modified

A character design of a manga I wanted to make...
I modified it from this one [link] ...
Then, I wanted my main character to have a hero look...
Now, I wanted my character to look like an ordinary guy turned hero...
Somehow like he wears ordinary clothes, with only the cape and weapon symbolizing his heroship...

I know this drawing is crappy, since my style is still not much practiced...
Give me all the necessary comments for my improvement!
Thanks a lot in advance!